PEER REVIEWS

These are pictures of my first draft of the Rhetorical Analysis paper on "Snow, Glass Apples" by Neil Gaiman. It was a little over three pages, and the markings on the pages are from Professor Greg McClure, and another student in Writing 39B. The pencil marks were made by Kaixia Hu in class during peer review #1, however the pen marks are from Professor Greg McClure himself that he made after I hunted him down and forced him to read my paper.